*Spoiler Alert*
I really love the story you wrote for Advisor Icelot in the reality of Critic Dregg! It makes this character more vivid. Though it's a pity that he died.
I'd like to know how King Frake would sentence the fake angel for killing Icelot, after the dam completed?
Also, it's good to see how you utilize the idea of the alternative realities /multiverse (whatever you call it), that it's not just possible worlds for no reason like Spider-Verse, but in different realities, everything is basically the same (well, except the gender part in the genderswap reality), before Arc died, which is a crucial event for this universe.
And I guess, according to the story so far, because the alternative realities share the same universe, e.g. Arc as female, we shouldn't call such worldview "multiverse"? After all, there is one of other universes that helped the one where our protagonists lives in.
Finally, I wonder if you got the inspiration from the anime "Cells at Work" and drew the analogy between an universe and a human :D
In addition, if universes are really conscious, sentient beings, not merely the personification of the nature as a means of making the lore more understandable , that would be a MUCH BIGGER worldview than the one you has revealed to us!